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Comment by Dudley Voigt on January 20, 2014 at 4:04pm

Cute opening, nice energy, felt thorough and tightly edited.  You cover a TON of info.  In fact, I wonder if you could get it down to 5 minutes?  I also wonder if all that plot discussion should be in the beginning?

I like that you recognize the difference between the Orpheum and Pantages and how it worked for the show.

Great use of images to support your descriptions and illustrate some of your points.

Interesting reflections on the role of the Emcee and on breaking the 4th wall and talking to the audience).

It seems you agree on most things, what would happen if you didn't?  How would use that tension as an advantage?

Audio is a little challenging in the second half - like two songs are playing at the same time?

I like how you recognize the direction and identified the choices he made, the consideration of the audience's intelligence, and the power of silence.

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